Friday, 24 March 2017

Swimming recounts

This week we worked on writing creative recounts about our experiences at swimming. The aim was to use time connectives correctly to enhance our writing.


First we watched this video to help use remember all of the cool things we did at swimming.



Then we used wrote our awesome stories. Here are some examples. 

Jade 

When  we went to hop in the G.I pools I felt very excited to swim. First we had to go under the water for 10 seconds to wet our body.Then we grabbed a board and  stood on the wall to wait for the instructions.After that the instructor said when we swim we point our feet and  we put our feet together and kick fast. And when you do the streamline you have to put your head down and if you want to have some air you lift your head up but you do not stand up you just lift you head up. After we swam by our self then we went under the lane rope and sat on the  stairs under the water then the instructor said “you have to  kick your feet fast and you have to point you feet.”  Then  the instructor was testing us then she said  when you are finished kicking your feet go under the line and stand against the wall. And wait for the instructor to tell us what we have to do”.Finally  the other class came to swim but we had 1 more minute to swim then we  hopped out of the pool and got our towels and went back to class.  got changed into our school uniform and went out to play.


Last monday room 14 were getting changed for swimming. We line up for swimming l was excited.` then we were in the shower it was cold . next we went to the pool when we got in side we were kicking the water. after we were doing crocodile hands on the swimming borid. Next we did the starfish and turning around . we put our face in the water for ten second. We went under the swimming borid . then we did  the stream line .i had fun.


On Monday room 14 started swimming I felt a little bit nervous  First the swimming coach did the roll and we could only say yes if we were swimming. Then we put our towels on the chairs and then we got in a line then we walked to the showers so we can get all the stuff off and we walked in them four at a time then when it finished we had to get out. Next we walked back to the pool then we got in it then we started our first lesson.After That we learnt how to get and we had to do it nicely for our first lesson we got our diving boards and we learnt something with it. Lastly we got out of the pool and we got our towels and lined up then we walked back to class then when we got back to class we went to get change then when we got outside we only had half of lunch time.Finally when the bell rang we went back to class.At the end I walked back home and had a shower then I started playing on the the tv until 9o cloack.


on Monday my class went to the gi pools. Then I went to get changed. After we walked to the
Pools  we put our towels on the chairs  and we went for a shower. We came and listen to Kat say the roll. Next we climbed in the pool. We went swimming to the island then swimming back to the wall.   After that we did streamline we kicked our feet after we went back to school.

1 comment:

  1. hi guy's this is blakaetown here
    we like the way you do your swimming.
    On Monday's we do swimming lessons too.
    what swimming pool do you go to?
    we go to the town pool in Greymouth.
    by LIlly and Millar

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